2012년 1월 3일 화요일

<Complaints>

complaint structure goes like this
complaint > problem effect > solution > warning > closing

This is what happened to my friend Jennifer.
(Jennifer bought a new vooga runner - phone yesterday from world-mart. She payed 2 hundred dollars to buy the phone. After buying it, she played with the phone and then turned it off before shw went to bed. The day after, she turned the phone up and did kakaya talk with her friends. Few hours after, the phone became hot. Since the phone was so hot, she cooled it by the window.

Even though she did everything to cool the phone, she still got her phone getting hot. She left it home near by the window and went out to call her brother who lives in the same apartment. Sh brought her brother to her home. Her brother started to disassemble the phone. As soon as he touched the battery, the phone blew up into pieces with a bag sound. This happened with causing small fire, which spread into big fire. Jennifer and her brother couldn't escape quickly, so they got burned on their knees.

The nearby residence called the firefighter so Jennifer and her brother was saved. However, since they got their knees burnt, they could not walk anymore.)
The simple requirement needed for Jennifer and her brother is 4 million dollars. We warn you, Samsoon (the phone company that selled the phone) company to bring 4million dollars as soon as possible. Or,,, we would like to expose the accident to everyone in the world.

I look forward to your response.

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